“Firewood” – a micro story

March 24, 2010 · 4 comments

The clap of the hammer lit up the walls of the parking garage and stung my ears. I glanced at Sara, eyebrows raised. She answered my expression, “Wow, that’s loud. Oh well – go for it. We need this.”

My glance lingered and she nodded. I turned back to the wooden palate sitting on the concrete, grit my teeth, and attacked – coughing splinters everywhere. I felt suspicious. We weren’t doing anything wrong, but it was so loud I figured someone would complain. The neighborhood kids circled the parking garage on their bikes. Patrolling.

A minute later I stopped, ears ringing, and wiped sweat from my forehead. I raised my eyebrows to Sara. She stood at a safe distance – arms crossed.  ”Tough little guys.”

“It looks like it.” She laughed. “Let me try.”

“Nope.”  I grit my teeth and attacked harder than ever. Mostly because she was watching.

After a dozen more gunshots I gathered up some splintered boards and tossed them into the back of the jeep.  Firewood.

  • elton08

    I sound to me like you and Sara had a romantic and strange evening?

  • elton08

    I sound to me like you and Sara had a romantic and strange evening?

  • elton08

    I sorry for the typo It sound to me like you and Sara set the night on fire! Wow that sound better!

  • elton08

    I sorry for the typo It sound to me like you and Sara set the night on fire! Wow that sound better!

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